Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(elfs, magical necklaces), the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the going to a different realm synopsis made me think of Alice in wonderland (it so happens it was partly inspired), but you've taken that and brought it into a beautiful story line. The unique names is something I admire.
The first chapter "In the vast woods" was filled with thrilling sights, why was Rosettatu running? What was she doing in the woods? Why was she scared of being found out? How did that elf know her name?
I hope all these are addressed in the next chapter!
I personally love Fantasy novels! I have added this to my reading list! ❤️❤️❤️❤️💓
All being said, keep up the good work.
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is pretty interesting. I liked the vivid descriptions of the surroundings and what the character was experiencing. This story feels like Cinderella except instead of locking her in her room, Cinderella's step family was forcing her to go to the ball and marry an abusive prince. This also feels like The Wizard of Oz except Dorthy never wants to go home to Kansas. I was a little confused at first because the first chapter was talking about a woman named Rosetta while the second chapter was talking about someone named Rose Ann. I initially thought that they were the same person since Rose can be a nickname for Rosetta but then I found out, in the second chapter, that Rosetta is the MC's mom. I like the order of how the chapters shift from past to present time. Odd numbered chapters take place in the past while even numbered chapters take place in the present.
Wow! Fantasy! I love to read this kind of drama and fantasy together with a twist for adventures. When I read this it kinda excites me to read more of this story. Thank you for updated the story author! Hope to learn more about your story. Keep it up the good work author!
I was only planning to read a couple of chapters but ended up reading a lot more! The story is very interesting, especially if you like fairy tales with a twist. Like Alice going down a rabbit hole, you'll find a whole new world to this! Definitely going into my recommended list! Keep it up!
What a fantastic multi-faceted, fun read! Rose is growing in strength & understanding of this strange world she has accidently discovered. The elves & talking rocks, the knights & beautiful faries counter-balance the evil that lurks in the shadows. Every chapter worthy of your time!
This story really takes you to another time & place! The backstory is so interesting that I want a map image provided so to keep track of where Rose is in this Center Realm. I love her being strong & courageous & am excited to see where her adventures take her.
Good day, this is me the Trademaker and as promised I will review this work. The story is quite interesting despite of me reading the first chapters. It is fun and easy to read, I can understand well the dialogue, the actions of the characters.
I am not fan of female main characters but the character of the main story is quite remarkable. She is strong I can tell and by the way she speaks towards other characters is a testament to it.
I give this story 4.8 rating because I had fun reading it and it is fun as well.
That's all for now thank you!
This novel really deserves 5stars from me. Great artwork, I love how the author gives vivid description of events and characters. It's an interesting novel and I highly recommend it to anyone. Good job author, keep doing what you love best.
No exaggeration here, but this book is really amazing. I got hooked from the first chapter.
Suspense and adventure filled. Where's the place you desire? This book will take you straight there! Try it, I'm not kidding. I left my boring land and went to wonderland...LOL
An irresistible wonderful plot! Filled with suspense and intrigue at every turn . Set in a complex magical world, I especially loved the awesome characters and the pace is thrilling. Can't wait to read more and more and get to see secrets revealed. Keep them coming! Its a lovely piece of writing.
Writing is on point!
Gosh, it's very well written.
Especially, at the beginning where the MC is running away in the woods. It's so well depicted.
One of the best novels I've ever read with how good the writing is. I also added this book to my library for my inspiration for writing :3
No words left, 5 stars!
The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...
This story is absolutely great. The world that has built up over these chapters has a lot of potential for storytelling and interesting plot points. I love the characters and the way that the MC is thrown into everything, really hitting hard that this is a fantasy world and not the human world. An absolutely great piece that I highly recommend reading, and I'm excited for more to come out.
I love the plot and story but it needs a little more of editing because there are errors but it’s minor so it’s fine. Good background and everything else is perfect. More updates to come! Good luck and keep writing!!
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Every wording is emphasized with meaning and atmosphere, it's good for someone who likes to immerse themselves with the story. I'm not a professional writer myself so I can't point anything bad within this story but hey, It's something good for your time, a hidden gem hiding from a thousands and thousands of other similar gem with unique and it's own aesthetic. Kudos for the author for making such a wonderful story
It's really recommend, I've only read a couple of chapter but I will finish it in the future
You got me hooked, like literally.
I’ve never had that happen before, on Webnovel, that is.
Well, the last time I felt this excited, was probably around 4 years ago.
<3 I’ll be waiting for the next update.
The story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. I defo can't wait to read more. The author is good at giving excellent descriptions which evokes a beautiful mental imagery. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️
Wow. This book is so descriptive and on point.
How can someone be so creative!
How can someone write like legends!
This story will definitely be one of the best books in the world.
This story is absolutely amazing! The author uses precise details to depict the surrounds exquisitely. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Keep up the good work and I can’t wait for the next chapters!!
I like how the characters' emotions are conveyed clearly, as well as the descriptions in the scenes! Also how it's in first person. Maybe it's because I can't write in first person to save my life- I thought it was slightly choppy, but nevertheless I really enjoyed reading this! ^w^