I am truly at awe with how the MC's are being portrayed and written.
Stories with sappy, relatable, and emotional connection then you mash it up with romance. We are definitely into a ride for a rollercoaster of emotions.
I recommend this story for those who enjoys ****-romance with intriguing plots.
I am a certified hooked reader.
Keep it up!!
Good writing and interaction between the characters. That is what I have observed with the first five chapters I read so far.
I can sympathize with the main character for having a bad story background, being unloved and unaccepted. I would think that the story may end in a tragedy, maybe, or not. I always hope that she will have a good fate at the end.
About the writing quality of the story, it is good as well. I have to repeat that line because your story is quite easy to read, the words goes well, it describes the interaction and relationships with the characters. The words used in the story clearly describes the story and is very understandable.
I have a fun read with this story and may post another review soon. I am not a fan of this genre, but your work has changed my mind. I will keep this in my library.
My verdict for the rating is 4.8/5.0.
Thank you for reading this review, have a nice day!
TradeMaker
I believe MC wants to know about her father but is restricted by her mother side.. Author has explained it neatly and shortly..
MC has a luxurious life and lived in most places, I like it..
Ya'll. You gotta cgeck this story. I must say that the author really shares her ideas. Thank you for bringing us another story. Keep goung coz we are waiting.
Good job!
Okay. So first of all, I am not a big fan of romance novels at all. But hot damn, this is good. Outstanding character development! Please keep writing. 😀😅
Wow! Just wow! I'm not through with the chapters yet,but the author already got me. I just had to stop to leave a review first and let others know what they are Missing out on. If you happen to be in the review section trying to see whether or not you should read the book,my advice to you is to just GO AHEAD AND READ THE BOOK ALREADY!! I promise you won't regret.
BEAUTIFUL ❤️❤️
Yes, China is an amazing country. This is not what you read about him. Seeing Beijing and Shanghai, you realize that the world is big.
The novel itself is well written, I liked the first chapters. They are written in a lively, captivating manner, they are full of light. I will read more. I have included your book in my library.
Nice text block!
Looking forward to new chapter updates!
From what I can gather, the FL is a rich girl who doesn’t conform to society’s rules according to her status. While I don’t agree with the life she lives, I can partially understand that she hasn’t received any love to make up for the sense of detachment she feels.
I’d probably need more chapters to really see how I feel about her because as of now, I am a bit conflicted...
However, don’t get discouraged by my review ! Everyone has their own opinions, and I’m just one out of your many other fans. So keep up the good work author ! I’ll be cheering for you too !
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Well, what can I say besides it being a good romance novel? The characters are interesting with a certain characteristic or trait to them. The release rate might be slower compared to those daily releases, but in terms of quality, it's there and worth the wait. After all, quality over quantity.
First off, any book with a sassy, sarcastic main character is surely going to pull me in. So, great job on that, author!
On to the review~
Points to consider:
-Grammar: I know it sucks to proofread, but editing really makes a difference. So, go edit it again when you have time.
-General storytelling: I loved how it first started, but then the flow just kind of broke for me. I'm telling you this now since it's still a few chapters in and could still be edited. My point is: The MC gradually lost her voice and personality as the story went on. Make sure to tailor the events in a way that makes the readers want to know more about her.
-Mystery Aspect: I think too much information has been revealed all at once, and the thrill of there having a mystery was soon gone.
GREAT POINTS:
-I love and adore the writing style! If it could be consistent all throughout, this story can be a real gem!
-The characters are relatable. I mean, I've never been to China nor Europe, but I could still relate to them anyway (especially with the contests and high society stuff). Basically, it shows that you either have some good amount of experience in those topics, or that you've done your research well. Either way, good job!
To conclude, it's a great novel, with a high potential to serve up some mean dishes of drama and romance. Looking forward to more!
To the author, great job and keep it up~
Omg. Your writing is really really good. The description of her childhood, the absence of her father. I felt her, as if she’s personally telling me the story. Amazing talent you got right here, darling. Just wow.
Characters in this novel are good and written incredible method. The author is showing us the greatness of romance that he can write. I love to future content and hope the author won't make us wait long.
It's almost a relief to be able to read such a well-written romance story. The author has an excellent grasp of language and clear expressions that don't distract you from the story itself. Great job!
I kind of get why you named your story Capture your feeling. It was indeed capturing, as you read the story, you'll get to know what struggles our MC faces. Partying and wasting once life is not the best option but everyone has done it. Great job author. Keep inspiring people 🤗👏 Thanks for the reads... keep updating.
The MC has a lavish lifestyle. However they are poorly loved and cherished. I find these kinds of MC pitiful sometimes. I'm sure she will be able to find happiness somehow.
I loved how detailed you wrote regarding the expressions and feelings of the MC.
BTW, she could buy a jaguar and an apartment complex and still have money to burn?! Wow. To be that rich...
Amazing the emotion of the mc touched me and hie the characters made was also incredible hope to read more of the essence of the soon chapters. Pleasee author keep doing moree heheheh I really liked it keep moving forward.
I'm enjoying this novel, it unraveling romance story, can keep a reader glued to the screen for hours.
Nice storyline.
Nice character for the MC.
This story is so interesting to bypass.
It's all five star rated.
This kind of romance story is something I enjoy. It is tag as ****, but DT and Ellise interaction are not your usual teenager cheesy love story. I like DT and Ellise. Good chemistry. I want more
That was a very good book. It was one of those books where everything goes wrong but one happy thing at least happens. Its a feel good book which I like
A complete new concept of story which is depicted so well!
I loved all the chapters & looking forward to it for binge reading❤️❤️
Permanently added to my library ❤️
Good job dear❤️
I'm a sucker for a good romance story line, especially one that doesn't cross the border of being too cliche. I think you were able to develop a good characters. Hope to see more of it in the future. ✌️👍
You have a strong characterization game going there. Ellise is very likeable MC. She's quite fun to read. She isn't the fussy female lead you usually got. Update more!
I love how the characters aren't all over each other. I think you got it good with the character building. They have such distinct characterization, not just someone who "talks" in between dialogues.
Please update more! 🤗🤗
I like the interaction between your main characters. There is a ******* between them, but I like how
you hold the emotion and keep it shimmer, while the rest of the story unfold. I'll be waiting for a
steady updates!
The strong female lead is gutsy, her character is solid. Dialogues are very engaging. It's tag as romance but there isn't romance yet, in the story. But I'm already booked!
Updates please ✌️🙏
The author had a good quality of writing for the story like this sometimes it's really difficult to be sequential in creating story. In fact, there's always updates and developments in every chapter which I or the readers get more interested to know what will be next to happen. The names of the characters are appropriate to the place where they from. Well, I just can't wait to read more chapters of this story and I hope that it will release soon! :)
Amazing storyline and writing skills. The story is remarkable and relatable at the same time. Overall a satisfying read. Kudos on this great story. Keep on writing!
well **** fiction are always lit! and lemme say this, you captured the feels on bringing your characters! good job! keep it up with the way you describe your imagination!
Honestly, I liked the book. I can tell the Author put a lot of work into it and her character, Elise is an imperfect MC and that just makes us relate even more to her because that's how we all are.
Good work author 👍 we hope for more of this.
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