Reviews of The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic) by MapleLeaves - Webnovel

An amazing HP fanfic, with a lot of potential, sadly there has been no development for the last 3 years. I really want to see a new chapter, even if the story stops after the second year in Hogwards, at least there would be a sense of a completion, as it would count as a short fanfic.(*￣3￣)╭

Essa é uma boa história e uma pena que o MC tem que ficar se limitando por causa do diretor demônio branco, gostaria que o livro falace mais do avô dele

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Oh, lo digo enserio me gusto bastante, entretenido aunque la parte final fue bastante rápida con la prisa de acabarlo, fue un poco cliché lo de Cho pero muy bueno para varias. Espero poder leer más

please continue, it's such a good book, the story,and all

It's a good book. The beginning does not come out of no-where and the character has realistic power stats. <3 [img=recommend]

Don't waste your time on this, I mean this seriously, the only thing you'll get is a headache and anger at the author for creating a Grindelwald beta.

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Great story and I love it. But the creator hasn't been active in over a year so if you don't want to be left on a cliffhanger don't read it.

bit weird emotionally, but still solid.

It's probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. It's a shame it is not updated anymore, I believe there was still a lot of potential.

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The idea of the story is just simply brilliant to just incorporate fantastic beasts and harry potter though it can be improved at some points thank you for your work.

Its a good fanfic overall and even though it can be improved at some points i still enjoyed it however one of the things that bothered me us how he cant refuse cho it quite annoying as he agrees with most of her requests eve if he doent want to

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The idea of the story is just simply brilliant to just incorporate fantastic beasts and harry potter. The way you made the main characters revolve around the mc it seemed so plausible. You should write more stories like this you are clearly talented my friend.

Well, I believe that the work was abandoned as well as the content of it is currently low, so I haven't won much points with me. Maybe I like overpowers characters, but I think at least the storyline isn't a big deal these days, so that's my note.

The MC is an idiot, has no ambition, cant even tell that he is a reincarnator.... story makes the mc i to a side character. He is nothing like grindlewald just has the looks thats all. Was a waste of time reading... shouldnt be labeled as a grindlewald fic if they act like a beta with no ambition.

En primer lugar hay muchas cosas mal en la novela desde eventos hasta cosas básicas como la presentación de los personajes 1. el autor no a leído ni uno de los libros y se nota mucho, hay errores en el como funcionan las cosas y hasta en características de los personajes (no seria tan malo pero el MC dice ser un gran fan de harry potter un potterhead) 2. los personajes están mal, primero por el MC no tiene motivaciones, lo malo de este tipo de novelas es que el protagonista se vuelve tan op que es aburrida de leer la obra. Los personajes están muy inspirados en las novelas, Hermione en las películas es muy sobrevalorada, ron es muy infravalorado y Harry es muy subestimado 3. Los eventos son muy aburridos, la vida del protagonista es básicamente ser despreciado por todos, sin haber echo algo, y practicar magia oscura, el porque, no se deja claro nunca, dice que es un chico solitario y que es culpa de su cabello, wtf, eso es ilógico, aparte dice aprovechar estos sentimientos de soledad para su magia, pero el nunca estuvo solo 4. sus relaciones son aburridas, la química con cho y su encuentro fue bueno y me agrado, pero lo que siguió fue un sinsentido total 5. Tal vez lo peor de todo es que por culpa de su falta de lectura en los libros no sabe para que sirve la sala de menesteres, al menos tendría que leer la wiki para saberlo. NO ES TAN MALA NOVELA, PERO DEFINITIVAMENTE NO ES UN BUEN FANFIC, la premisa es original pero lo demas carece de sustancia en especial el entrenamiento con su abuelo, tomate tu tiempo para explicar, andas muy rapido 1.3 de 5

I love it!!!!! Is one of the best fan fictions of HP that I hd read ever!!!! Please don't drop it. The writing quality may be is not the best but the story and the plot and info that is shown about HP world is amazing. I recommend 100 this fanfic

is this fanfic dropped or just on pause? im hesitating if i should read or not since the last update was 2 months ago. but aye exp exp exp exp for me

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I enjoy reading your fanfic of the Harry Potter series, I'm hoping to see more of Fred's adventures, especially in Prisoner of Azkaban and Goblet of fire.

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I like this new approach here. tired of seeing regular fanfics.mc character development is good . it's a very good novel please don't drop it.

The author is clearly missing A LOT of important information, and is just twisting shit to make it 'AU' even if the stuff makes no sense. The MC is an annoying brat who can't own up to what he is and cries over stupid shit. There are way too many plot holes in this for it to be enjoyable to someone who has read MANY HP fics like me.

About what you would expect given the author's description. I did not have high hopes, but it was worth the read. Ideas definitely need to be better fleshed out, but the author tells you that going in.