Reviews of Wanted Wanters by le_shounenboi - Webnovel

Thanks, guys for all the love!!! Please keep reading Wanted Wanters. The story's first arc will conclude soon and we'll be moving onto the next arc which will be even more exciting. New characters, new abilities, and a lot of action.

So part 1 of the Sweet Revenge Arc has already ended in the story. The second part of this arc will start ten days from now. Please do give it a read. The story has been very merry until now but it's definitely going to get darker. I really want to write the ending of this arc asap but I have to first create a plot for the main antagonist of this arc...what a drag 😩. Thanks for all the reviews and please continue reading Wanted Wanters.

Since I have my exams coming up this story will be on hiatus indefinitely. Sorry for the inconvenience. For those who haven't read this story please do give it a read and leave me some feedback. Thank you!!!

Some good writing here! Good world building and a satisfying amount of background information that really helps to make the story immersive. I really enjoyed the character dynamics, and the scattered humour throughout. Also the writing is very good, the whole story flows nicely which makes it an enjoyable read. My only wish would be that dramatic events or revealtions get a bit more emphasis!

It seems I have already left a review on this book, but I will gladly do it again. This is one of those stories that you can keep coming back to. Still think Dillian is funny and a hilarious man from the very beginning. I have seen that some of the grammar errors have been reduced, I like a nice good flow story. This is definitely one of those. I highly recommend this to other readers!!! I want to mention that this is the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

a great story the story line and the characters are really interesting , yes the cover is spooky but wonderful you are a talented writer keep up the good wrk

I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]

Wanted wanters. I want to read more! The want is killing me. This novel has a great potential to blow up with time and effort. It just needs more chapters!

If you wanted readers to be spooked after looking at the cover, you did a good job. It is creepy in a good way,lol. Wanted wanters..? The cover and the title make people 'want' to read the book. See what I did there. :) The story is detailed and well written. Good luck.

Quite a nice read! I must say, Dillon's character development is exquisite. Your writing style is very nice The character design is very good and World Background is nice but I felt like it needed more description but still, it is fine! Overall: A nice read :D

This story has grown so well, I'm loving it. I see that you have improved on your grammar author great job. Your second story arc is killing it but maybe we could get a little more description of France. You have used con artists really well in your second arc and I really felt sorry for Dillon when you made him propose to all those girls. Keep it up! You are doing a great job!!!

First when I see the story's title, it sure catch my attention immediately. I like how the charcters' introduction were portrayed especially the main lead. The world background is also well written. Overall this book is a great read! Greatly recommended! Keep it up author!

This is an enjoyable book! :D I really like the characterization, especially the Demizu guy hehe! <3 Also, the writing is really great! Grammar is perfect, punctuation is also great hehe! Great job, author! <3

Wow this story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this novel will thrive in the future! Congrats on your work and may your novel be popular in the future! BTW, I am from review swap....

Your story was very engaging. I like the protagonist Dillion, and I love that he is a ladies' man. I laughed at how the girls kept coming up to him. Great job author, keep it up!

When I first read this I thought that it was a rip off from the anime stray dogs. After continuing I saw how unique and intresting the story was. The dialogue is superb but the author needs to seriously work on describing the settings and the characters moods and other small things. I'm surprised how well it was written in despite of the whole thing mostly being dialogue but such a thing might kill this story in the end if its not fixed. You have great skills as a writter just keep at it.

So I read up to chapter 6 and the story is good. It has the same speed as my own novel. Overall It's great, just a little more polishing is required nothing too big. The characters are likable I had few questions about the motivations of a certain character, so I wrote a comment for that. I think you will do great just don't give up on writing like others. I support your novel and added it to my collection. So keep up the good work.

Hi author, You had a great start, it just needs to be consistent. I read some minor errors but it doesn't reel me out from the story. Clarify some scenes and it'll be perfect! Wishing your book good luck! Regards, Glenstonx

this is a great start and an interesting one at that! the characters are well designed and created and the writing style is good. keep the effort up.

Hi, your story is very interesting. Especially the way you have shown your protagonist's personality. The language of the story is very well written. The description of different scenes is well detailed, but I would as a reader I think you can expand a bit more on some of the scenes.

It's definitely a genre i wouldnt read but a genre i'd like in an anime or in a live action because this is amazing. The writing stile is crisp and distinct ! Dillion's character development is so far done at the right pace and most writers usually mix up between characters and their traits especially while dialoguing but this book is f****g amaziiiinggg

The beginning reminded me a lot of Bungou Stray Dogs, but it gets really different. For one, the MC is much more powerful. Kind of. The writing has a few grammatical errors, but it isn't anything the average reader wouldn't be able to understand. Updates are consistent and the story is already flowing. The character design and abilities are interesting. There's already a !interesting! dynamic between the MC and his foil, so readers should be on the lookout for that. The world design so far looks fairly logical, but there is still more than enough room for the author to throw in twists. Its a great start!

The story has an interesting plot. The characters were intriguing with their unique abilities. The mystery behind their identities certainly made me read more. The story development is something to look forward to. There was just some issues with the sentence structure, but it could easily be fix with proofreading, so that the flow of the story could move smoothly. Overall, this book has a good potential. Keep updating.

nice story so far! as a person who watches anime, I can sort of feel its influence. some grammar errors, and I have trouble understanding Dillon's ability; but an extremely intriguing premise, and can't wait to see where you take this~

As somebody already metioned (Jo_J) it is a perfect start! Just follow your dreams! The storyline is interesting and the main character also. Added to my Library. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Perfect start! You have an idea and try to implement it... Dream, chase the dreams, reach them and dream again... as I say to people :) I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas! Merry Christmas! Just think about my comments in your text. I will come back in a few days.

This is a really promising story,I really wish to see what do the author does with it. I wish him best of luck and of course I will continue reading your story.

This story is looking really promising up to where I have read however I have still not been able to comprehend Dillon's ability exactly. The story is looking like a good modern shounen story, I'm looking forward to reading it.