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Daoistfgu58R
Gostei muito de forma com foi escrito, e tema que a historia aborda. E também a construção dos personagens. Espero que grande aventuras aconteçam, e que Algo aconteça entre Naomi e Tatsuo.
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la0la0
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its a worth of shot reading this story there some grammar mistakes i have foreseen but it is part of the process, the story has a good plot and characters your book cover is also good ilove it![img=update][img=recommend]
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Lhdjia
I would recommend this book to those who like this genre. However, there were certain grammar mistakes but it was still fun to read and is still understandable. The characters were designed quite uniquely and the story has a vibrant setting. Kinda pitied Naomi XD. But overall, keep up the good job Author![img=recommend][img=fp]
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TeodoraK
This is one of the rare romance stories that I would recommend even to those, who usually avoid the genre. Despite certain grammar mistakes, The Hacker Girl is easy to read and fun to follow. It will charm you with a cast of quirky characters and a vibrant setting. The main character gets kidnapped a bit too many times in the story (poor Naomi really should watch her back), but the mess she causes every time propels the narrative forward.
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Wendrila_Kundu
Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, it just makes you wanna go back and digest every word one after the other. This book is definitely worth it.
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somethingsomethin
I like the story. But there are a lot of technical problems with the writing. Still, if you're just looking for an engaging story and good world building it's still a good look.
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Lancee
The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
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HANA_4345
The story looks promising. But as most reviewers have already written. The grammar part is a big turnoff. I recommend you use Grammarly when you are writing your chapters. It is not 100% accurate, but it corrects at least 90% of your mistakes. Another option in case you are writing on your cellphone will be writing the chapter in word, so their autocorrect can mark your mistakes. Then, you pass it on WN. The story is pretty nice though, as I said at the beginning it looks promising. Have fun writing!
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Ice_Princesss
I really love the female lead, Naomi, as it's easy to understand her and her emotions. The story is well written .There are a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there as I read the chapters. I would suggest you to use Grammarly, an app that helps you fix grammar and spelling mistakes .I use it too and it's really helpful. Overall, I'm definitely keeping an eye on this novel. All the best ❣️
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Blackpaint
I find this story very endearing! The FL's mind is a cute mess😂 The pace is good and characters are well made. As for the writing quality, I see the efforts of the author in improving their writing[img=recommend] One thing I could suggest is use Grammarly to assist you in writing. This one will definitely stay in my library!~
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A_Bored_Person
Amazing book, the story is well written and the world-building is very well done. I could clearly imagine the scenes unfolding while I was reading this novel.
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MayDreamer
The story matched with the cover plus the title, and it gave out a Japanese manga/novel vibe to me, but there were many errors here and there, which kind of confused me. The concept of a hacker girl is really cool, but her backstory was a bit unreasonable to me or it just didn't match. Leaving all that I said above, it is a good story that needs just a bit of improvement. Last but not the least All the best author *It may sound harsh but it's an Honest review*
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Darine_ALRAMMAH
A very attractive and original story. I love your title very accurate to the content. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!
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Yi_Xi
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This writing style could be associated with how japanese-based translators do their work. There are no other problem and I really like the MC! But if someone would be to nitpick, the sudden change of tenses in the paragraph could make someone stop reading for a moment. But it's still a good story overall! 💓
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Luminous_Arcadian
The plotline and story development was good. It's actually very easy to comprehend since the author didn't use complicated words and terms, so it wasn't hard to understand. I just have some setbacks with the characterization. The world background was also quite lacking because of the absence of details. I would like to suggest adding more details yo the descriptions to make them easier for the readers to read. There were also quite grammatical, typographical, and punctuation errors that need to be edited. I also noted the misuses of pronouns, and I hope that those could be fixed through editing and a few revisions. Overall, it was a good story but it just needs to be smoothened. I hope the author won't be offended by this review. I wish you the best of luck, Author-san!
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SabergKeys
As a fan of the Japanese otaku culture. When I read your novel it feels like reading a light novel. It has the anime-ish vibe into it that I enjoyed and surprisingly this feels like something I would watch as an anime. It's a unique concept to use a hacker, which is why I can see this as a win to anyone. While there are some few errors but a little edit would fix it and you're English is good; it can almost match a native English speaker.
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KayLillyt_1
A fascinating story. The author’s writing style moves the story along beautifully. It is steadily paced and the lead character Naomi is fierce and intriguing. The author has given the readers something to look forward to with each chapter.
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Akira_Monadelle
A very unique and intriguing novel. The writing style is wonderful and the wording is perfect. The story is depicted very realistically. I was immediately pulled in by the synopsis. Looking forward to more updates :)
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JJ_Prakoso
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far: World Building: The world building in this world is quite find especially with The MC, Naomi whereabouts. It gave some context about the living of the rich and the poor especially on Naomi cases. However, I do want to author to expand more the world building by showing the environment, describing the atmosphere, and give detailed imagery. Character: Naomi as a Mc is quite nice and actually have a clear goal or motivation which is a simple won, she didn't want to force herself sell her bodies. Which is in my opinion it's pretty great and I appreciated the effort for the author try to fleshing out the MC character by giving backstory in a smooth way. As for her love interest, his interaction is quite decent and as a character, he is like a curious, yet charming guy. I do hope their relationship will get a significant development to make the story even more exciting. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. keep up the good work
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Yonko_master
I remember reading this story 3 to 4 weeks ago and being very disappointed with the dialogue and the grammar errors. To be honest, during that time I would have given your story 2 stars, however, you have improved your novel putting quotation marks, and improving the grammar. Of course, there are still a few grammatical errors that can be seen, however, I still do understand the essence of what you meant! I do encourage you to make the chapters a bit longer. I do see a lot of improvement in your work, congrats!
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Ozymandias007i
I think your command of English is very good. Even though there are some grammatical and errors here and there I still get the sense of what you're trying to say which is good. Keep on working and reading English novels from native speakers and your English will be on par with them if not better. Your world and story is interesting. It's well paced which is good and it's been engaging this far. Keep on working. There's definitely some potential in this story.
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Mia_Evergreen
I Loved it!! yeah Cox I'm a anime and manga fan. The background world is great and the Characters are interesting Naomi ♥️. can't stop turn pages. though the chapters are short. but it's hook you up. makes you want more
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ohremi19
First of all, I want to apologize first if I sounded too harsh. I like stories with Japanese settings like this because I myself like manga, anime, and J-drama. I can imagine their reactions and how they talked from how you write them. But there were many grammar mistakes. It wasn't that bad and readers could still figure out what you wanted to convey in the sentence. Major points to fix in my personal opinion are: One, I suggest using quotation marks instead of dashes and tidy up the dialogue. Which one is the words they're saying, which one is the action they're doing in between, who spoke it. It will be easier to distinguish them and put them properly in the paragraph using quotation marks. Two, pay more attention to the pronouns. For example, the author used 'he' when mentioning the MC from time to time. Check who are you referring to in that sentence and make sure you are using the correct pronouns. I'm sorry if I sound too lecture-ish, but I hope the author can improve your grammar and get more readers because the story itself is good. I use Grammarly to make sure my grammars are correct, so you can try using it too. Keep up the good work!
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