Reviews of Naruto : The Wind Calamity by Devil_Hex - Webnovel

Great fan fic. Well written and sensible training

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Okay, let's go Writing Quality is upto the standard, Stability of updates ... is amazing if one takes into account that the author is pumping almost 1.5k worth chapters daily. The story is slow paced?... I don't know exactly about the pacing here, so I ignore that as I enjoyed reading all those 500 chapters, some people might not like it being slow, but you will probably enjoy it. To conclude it's one of the best naruto fics I have read and looking forward to it's future.

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One of the best novel around, but I need more can anyone tell me of a fanfic that is as good as this to read.

One of my best novel... Love it... Even if it is slow pace... Author done a wonderful job... [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=coins][img=exp]

One simple word: amazing Greatest strength of the story: The mc is a smart and cautious character who's decisions are understandable. I really enjoy reading each and every chapter. It is the best naruto fanfic i have ever read. Thanks author

A mandatory Fanfic for any Naruto fan, the development is slow but it makes you appreciate how the author lays the foundations for something great, there are few AU elements but nothing crazy, it is very easy to see the effort the author makes to make his work consistent and exciting at the right moments, I'm up to date on chapter 502 and it still doesn't reach the Naruto canon but I have found myself on several occasions excited by the fights or situations in which the MC finds himself, I consider it to be the type of Fanfic that you can follow every week without losing track or interest. Regarding the MC, I don't really love it, sometimes he seems too detached, almost sociopath-like, but that's more than anything because of my predilection for stories where there is romance. In conclusion I tell you that if you are looking for an entertaining work and you like Naruto you should not pass up this gem, I hope that the author can give it the ending he wants and does not let this work drop.

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I haven’t read a lot of it myself, but the grammar seems really good compared to a lot of other fanfics on here. Very easy to read, and just an enjoyable story overall.

I loved this novel, it is very good, as the author was creative in it, as he wrote a main character wonderfully and skillfully, good and enjoyable dialogues between characters, and wonderful work in the sequence of events of the story. Although his interventions are many in the plot, there are not many changes in the future and are noticeable on the level. Far away, so please improve this aspect to see at least a main character, the consequences of changing events, but the novel remains very good. I recommend it because it is one of the best ongoing novels at the present time.

the author is super creative with creating abilities and amazingly develops characters in a realistic way and not just changing the character instantly

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Author, here's an idea for you: You can show some self insert history of the ninja word in your upcoming chapters, things that Fujin does not know, and gets shocked knowing. Fujin is always ready, has planned everything for his future, but there should be times when some situations pushes him to change his plan entirely. For Example : Fujin is not intrested in being the Hokage because the only thing he wants from the Scroll of Seals is the Edo Tensei Technique. So, If Hiruzen dies in the Konoha Attack plan and the elders want Fujin as a candidate, but Fujin refuses, then the Elders can reveal few secrets that no one nows about the Hokage, like The Scroll of Seals is not the most treasured item but its the Black Scroll that the new Hokage gets from the past one. IT not only have top secrect informations but also have few Techniques that only a Hokage can know. Like the red barrier jutsu that all previous hokage performed and you can add some more, like multi-shadow clone, the experiment on cells which increase the chakra quantity (can tell that Tobirama started it and Orochimaru with the help of Tsunade perfected it), the main jutsu of ino-shika-cho clan (can tell that during the formation of the village tobirama came to a deal with those three clan that they will always be part of Hokage Faction and some more benefits, in return for their main jutsus. He noticed that learning all three jutsu increases the abilities of a Shinobi 🥷 by large margin  i.e Nara clan's jutsu increases the spiritual Energy nd Yin release mastery Akimichi clan's jutsu increases the physical Energy and Yang release mastery Yamanaka clan jutsu increases the connection between spiritual nd physical Energy by strengthening the SOUL.) You can add few more interesting self made facts to make it more interesting.  This will increase the allure of Hokage seat to Fujin (which will force him to change some of his future plans) and will also show why Orochimaru and Danzo were interested in being the Hokage. And will show the foresight of Tobirama. That he thought of a future in which there will be a time when there can be no kage level Shinobi in the village then Any peak Elite Jonin can become powerful by learning the justus in the Black Scroll and can reach Kage level.

really good read i highly suggest it ssssss ssssss ssssss ssssss ssssss ssssss how many words do I need? I should of hit it by now........finaly

finally a mc who doesn't waste the dream of becoming a shinobi. he comes from literally nothing to an op for his age genin and I'm really happy reading this, I'm so used to Naruto fanfics but this is some good stuff

Brazilian here, i liked your history, but where's romacnce😓😓😓😓

writing quality- 5-stars; The quality of writing for a fan fiction or even a novel is amazing.Story development- 4-star; The story progression is very good, although, some things are better changed.Character design- 3-star; This where I have the most problem- From the beginning I wholeheartedly supported the MC development and his situational development, but, while at first I had no issues with it, I am unsure as to why would Author try and insert normal relationship and friendship between MC and his teammates. Because, the MC even after so many good interaction and slight connection with his teammates, did not save Meiko Uchiha, when he could... And let's say he did not then why show sad emotions?... The character development is really negligent here... I truly had the urge drop the story right there and then, but, the story is still somehow carrying itself, although it has lost all its previous charm for me...

Same this type of mc that only is after strength and is a coward in anything remotely dangerous feels boring and can’t attach yourself with the character .Fujin(the mc is the worse part of the novel) the rest is a 10 but it’s hard to read after you find out he isn’t cool and collected just emotions less and goal driven for strength (like what’s the point of being strong if your alone bruh)

It is one of the best Naruto fanfiction out there ...

Just finish the story, waiting for more update, love the story specially the details you put attention to

Top notch story writing and character development one of the best fanfic on Naruto universe

This is a great novel, any words.Fujin is a robot, yes, but is the most intelligent robot in the world A recommendation to the author is to give it stronger emotions, such as hate, jealousy, love and others. Even with that defect, it is the best Naruto fanfic. 5 stars well deserved.

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Your book is very well written. The grammar is pretty well done throughout, it's entertaining, and you can see the improvement in every chapter. The only major issue is you crippled yourself with the MCs personality. He is a basically machine with no true emotions. Now this makes for some entertainment, but it also makes it hard to really connect with him. I hope your next book can work off of this, and really do your writing ability justice. [When do you plan to start writing your next one, if you plan to at all?]

This novel/fanfic made me fall in love with fanfics. I didn't even know they could get this good and thought most were just self-inserts. Thank you so much for introducing me to this stuff man. Sadly, not much can come close to what you have made here.

really the best naruto ff hope you finish your story

This is a great fanfic in my opinion. There are many rich details and it's clear the author has done his research on the Naruto world as well as add some of their own details. If there are some weaknesses, it could be that the MC likes to keep to themselves a lot of the time, and tries not to make friends so that can hurt character interactions. He's also a training maniac, and there are a lot of training chapters that may turn people away for being dry and repetitive.

I like this novel but having no romantic interest makes the mc seems like less realistic and human like...I mean having something to protect is the best way to push a person to desperation to become strong