Indra chakra broke at the beginning

Greetings, fellow readers
I just wanna say, This novel fanfic is a good one I read but it's just have too much small mistakes that makes it a bad experience to read.(sorry author)
So I have dicided to take the great burden of correcting the small mistakes and make it a enjoyable experience for my fellow readers.
(It's just a copy of another one but I have translated it into a more readable story.)
Please have mercy on me. It's my first time writing so please don't expect much.