Webnovel Author: B_l_a_n_k_2167 - Novel Collection

Great writing and the suspense is really in there with the tension flowing through words to words it really is appealing to read and get hooked up by it.

There is not much to say, surely its one of its kind hope to see you progress and succeed through this book of yours, and everyone should surely give this book a try

World design and its background could use some work, and for sure everything is you did was best your writing skill to your imagination was pure.

Writing skill is truly beautiful and the cover of the book is surely entangled me to dive into the world of your words i wish to see your book to get to its potential

The story is great and all, but it could use work. And hoping to see the author bring out its potential throughout the episodes he will have. Most importantly I wish for the author to use a better Cover for this book because a good cover will surely hook readers and their interests.

This is a captivating tale that seamlessly melds fantasy and apocalyptic themes. Hazel's odyssey through a world on the brink a narrative that is both thrilling and emotionally resonant. Readers will find themselves ensnared by the enchanting storytelling and eagerly anticipating the twists and turns that await Hazel in her quest for survival and self-realization.

Indeed a great storyline, hope to see it on the front page someday. Keep up the good work, and try to portray the world a bit more. it will bring life to your novel.

TBH your synopsis hooked me up, it really was a thrilling fantasy and worth giving a try. I recommend those who are into fantasy genre, give this a try.

humor and potential romantic tension between the characters, as well as some comedic misunderstandings, although you should work on minimizing the blurb a bit it will look more professional that way

the idea that one's actions can have unforeseen consequences and emphasizes the importance of learning from one's mistakes is great!!! keep up the good work!

The story touches on themes, the pursuit of one's dreams, and the ability to find strength even in the face of adversity. It also emphasizes the importance of unity and solidarity among women in the quest for a fairer world. Its pretty good!

This thrilling storyline combines elements of espionage, mystery, and personal redemption to create a gripping narrative. its really is a nice story for sure! keep up the good work!

Thank you for your kind words i will try to keep improving

This novel is great. World-building at that. It has lots of interesting aspects. people should give this a try and hopefully, the author will keep on improving.

After being taken by a demon succubus named Lilith, he is given magical powers and sent back in time one year with a grim ultimatum: he must manipulate and encourage unhappy wives to cheat on their husbands, or he will face certain death exactly one year later. That is a great start keep up the good work!

captivating and thrilling tale set in a world forever altered by the arrival of a mysterious comet. In this gripping narrative, the comet's passing grants supernatural abilities to ordinary men, women, and children, resulting in a world divided between benevolent spirits and malevolent devils. Its a nice start! keep up the good work!

The blurb is very good. The writing part could use some work. Being more creative would enchance you work. Keep up the good work and try to bring out the most.

you could work more on the blurb, which will give you an uperhand on your story buildup. Try to focus on your creative side of the story it will be of your help.

As a romance genre, it has quality. But the blurb could surely use some work there. Setting up the world background could use some work and overall it has lots of potential. And once again sorry for reaching out late i was kind of busy!! Gomenne!