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Jay_Synergy
Details allow the reader to visualize the scenery and also helps the reader understand what's happening. Long chapters for those that like to read a lot like myself, and a great story idea.
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Oemar_danoes
I appreciated the story so great that I have read. Every chapter may be long but I am terminated for it. Not everyone may like a dull chapter, as I have received along the way. Though, the tone of writing and character development is excellent. The story is desirable as a whole and you are up for a transcendent time reading it. Your imagination will be initiated !!! Enjoy the reading!!!
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Eggy_does_writing
I've read four chapters so far and I think the story is really good! My favorite part was how the author describes the surroundings. I also enjoyed the character interactions and how fluid the dialogue was. The only reason why I decided not to give this five stars is because of the grammar issues. There weren't many of those in the chapters I've read but it still got in the way of the story. Overall, this book is really great so far!
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ssun_ara
I like how detailed the author explain every events. I can imagine better for the situation, because of the long and detailed explanations. The plot is great. It's worth to read. Great job, author!
Ps: I kinda feel the author personality through the writing. Consistency, that is what I thought of the author š
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SamsaraWithWords
I love magic like I love life, and urban magic? Yes please. This book is well written. The pace is approachable and it sucks you into the world. I hope the author keeps writing!
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Dvanzy6
Loved this take on modern fantasy.
I was never a fan of fantasy books but the description of the magic and the characters brought me right into the story!!
I felt like I was on a roller coaster reading your book; It started slow and then increased it's pace.
Overall, one of the best books I've read here. Good Job!!!
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pandacornlova
Looking past the couple of grammatical errors in the beginning, I loved reading this. The descriptions allow for the reader to feel as if they are really in the book, as well as explain whats going on so the reader isn't confused. I liked the different characters and their personalities as well. I agree with the other readers that the magic descriptions are amazing. I also liked the pace of the book. I liked how it started, and felt that the pace moved to fit the events. Thoroughly enjoyable!!
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ShadowPrincess96
So after finishing this book, I just wanna say that I love it!
So beautifully written & I really loved the plot!
Enjoyed it thoroughly!
Well done Author nimā¤ļø
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A_N_Crestmore
A really wonderful opening. It really sucks you into the story. I like the take on modern fantasy. I also love the synopsis because of how it is short and sweet. One thing is that there are many characters and it sometimes is hard to tell who is who, though i wasnt put off by it. I would recommend!
The best part is the descriptions of magic btw.
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shrEk2o3
I like how it opening for the story. It's one of those that just gets you hooked upon reading the initial chapters. The plot and the characters are very intriguing. I highly recommend this book by this awesome author. Great job author-nim :D
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sillymlk
From the very first chapter I had no trouble understanding what was going on. It does really good job explaining the story in such a way, it's neither too little not too much overwhelming at information! The world of fantasy is hard to establish, but it does it quite splendidly. I suggest you give it a read!
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heyimliane
Your book is really nice! Plus it has great loooonggg~ chapters! And I love the plot, it has nice story line. I love the story development and world background because of itās imagery. I really donāt know about the updating stability because it was done when I read this so Iāll still give it a 5 stars. Good job!
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Dream_land
The moment I started to read it got me this story got me hooked really im so excited to read what happens to Flex next... Dam even the story background and the details you are giving is so amazing
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mssuigeneris
A fantasy to look forward to.
Writing - author has great grammar and he crafts his words very well, giving a vivid imagery to his readers
Updates - completed already as per labeled, so no qualms on this
Development - rather fast paced, so fast that the first chapter is overwhelming already
Characters - in reference to the aforementioned, a lot of characters were introduced in the very first chap. I can't easily distinguish one from the other, apart from Felix and Astera
World - again, great imagery
If I may suggest, you should add an auxiliary chapter describing more the system behind this novel's setting and the attributes of each faction / character
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Dunge
Read a couple chapter, got hooked especially by each chapter word amount. I prefer this kind of books where you have a definite storyline and boy I still have more chapter to read, it was completed too
I'm still getting used to the pacing, and it's still a couple of chapter so I have nothing more to say
Regardless, kudos for the author!!
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varean
I love fantasy stories especially when it comes to dealing with magic. I only read a few chapters and I'm hooked. I like your writing style and your description is wonderful. Good job! Though I usually like reading short paragraphs, I feel like your paragraphs are too long but some people might like it like that so don't worry. The length of the chapter is pretty long but some people like that long chapter like me. You should keep updating. Keep it up!
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Rados47
Wow... just... wow. An amazing story with really good pacing and really interesting characters, well written dialogues and amazing world building. It's a ten out of ten for me. I recommend this book.
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ReSoul
Pretty good story so far. Only read about the first two chapters.
The characters seem to have good chemistry with one another. Could use some more examples of magic existing to hook the reader aside from the mention of blacksmiths and just saying it's a magic school.
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risingfromashes
This story is very well written and paced well. Very entertaining. Looking forward to reading more. Also loving the world view. ššššššš great details.
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Chuck45Single
There are a few language mistakes in here that make some parts hard to understand. The plot is very interesting. The author is great at writing realistic dialogue and showing relationship dynamics but could improve on describing thoughts and feelings to give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work!
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madskie00017
I enjoyed the story so far what I have read. Every chapter may be lengthy but I am up for it. Not everyone may like a lengthy chapter, as I have learned along the way. Though, the quality of writing and character development is outstanding. The story is good as a whole and you are up for a great time reading it. Your imagination will be activated !!! Enjoy the reading 'coz I did !!!
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imaginingaddict_
although i am not much of a fantasy reader but this book is really good!!! the story is portrayed really well!! i would recommend this book to all of you guys out there!!! keep it up! canāt wait for the upcoming updates<3
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XXXXC
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
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melancholy_sins0
I honestly donāt know what to say...
I really donāt know what to say.
The storyās developing pace is amazing; it slows down a little, in important parts, but goes a little faster in less-than necessary details. Meaning, itās not slow paced, nor fast paced.
The settings, and the actions are vague, but I mean, it still gives you enough, and describes enough that, you can somehow imagine the rest on your own.
By any means, the author didnāt really have any, āholesā, itās just that, when he/she described a street, the bustling of the streets werenāt really needed to be said, you kinda just imagined it ok your own. Which is, I think due to the pace of the story; really cool though.
The one thing is, if you arenāt really into modern, or urban genres, it may be really hard to get into, which was for me, but, perseverance is needed.
I promise you that itāll all be worth it, in the end.
Oh, P.S;
Is it boring?
Nope. Like any other story, thereās going to be a part where, itāll be a little less exciting than the previous, or first chapter.
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The_Procrastinator
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Bloom759
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, magical realm, adventure.
The synopsis is spot on, really got my attention!
I personally love Fantasy novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
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Light_ray
I'm not that much into fantasy book but reading this book I get intersted. Although I read first two chapters for now still the story is portrayed nicely.
I would recommend it to be read as it's an interesting fantasy work. You've done great job author.....
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chayasreedeka
I just read it and I totally loved it. The writing style is good. Characters r lively... N updates r contant... It's well written n very good to read.
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qweenamanda
What in the world is this book!
Read it. You will not be disappointed.
Like wow.
This has made my day better.
Wowww
This book is so freaking amazing
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