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This is not your typical transmigration story.
After failing to strike a bargain with destiny, twins Aki and Akari Prescott are sent to another universe to hone their skills and pay their debts.
In another world filled with magic and adventure, these siblings must keep their true identities hidden and ensure that their mission is accomplished no matter what. Failure to do so means the total annihilation of the world.
But before they could take a step towards progress, the twins must first see if they could survive the harsh environment of this new universe.
With nothing but their wits and a few pocket change, Aki and Akari must embark on a journey that will change their lives forever.
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wonderful story loving it so far i wish you all the best for the rest of the chapters good luck , yes the story is about their destiny too but it is really good
Alright so I'll start with the positives. •There are no noticable grammatical errors so far. Everything is cleanly written, the characters thoughts and thought process being well described. Everything is also clearly understandable so theres no real chance of getting confused since the author writes, once again, clearly and cleanly. •The characters are well written and charming, the sisters relationship being well done. (Trust me I have a brother). Their reactions make sense and they have a set personality, of course they are fully capable of change. •The uploads are perfect. The author, at the time of posting this has had to reduce upload times due to personal matters but considering how she followed her pre-set schedule initially without missing a day I think it's safe to say that theres no worries of a chapter not showing up when up when it's supposed too. Alright now for the flaws. •It's cliche. It starts with an interesting hook. Twins meeting destiny's incarnate after training for all their life to demand something of it. Fairly interesting right? Well the incarnation of destiny will reincarnate them into a fantasy game world with a level system. The sisters solve an issue by dueling each other. If this is your kind of thing go ahead just know that the author doesnt just rely on the cliches solely. Theres some real solid story here with great character interactions. •The world doesn't really feel there. When describing the incarnation of destiny or a charector there is plenty of detail put in. Everything else gets the most basic description. A hut. Shiny magic rocks. grassy plains. This is a nitpick, I know, but I still think it's an issue since the characters will often be interacting in said shack. I dont know what's in the shack. Is there just a bed? Wheres the door? Does it have any decorations that might signify the natives culture? I dont know. Everything is just white. This is it really.
Nice book 👍🏼 Frankly I like Akari more Hehe. But anyways all the best and hoping the chapters ahead will be as good if not better as the ones before.
This piece is original and well written. The characters are pretty lovable, and descriptions really vivid. I could smell the wind and see the village and its castle ! You won't get bored !
This is very original and creative content with good updates and good characters . this is gold novel with great plot and ideas . Background is also well developed