Reviews of Swallowing The Spider (Linear) by DragonField - Webnovel

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Sentences run on for far too long. It’s like the writer wants to extend the story at any cost. Otherwise the story is pretty good

While the story and world are interesting, it comes with the huge baggage of needlessly long paragraphs filled with unwanted information and monologues. It incredibly difficult to read, its mostly tangents of the main character explaining things that have nothing to do with the story. A cursory review by the author cutting out the unnecessary bit would probably make this a great story. Even just breaking uo the long paragraphs to no more than 5-7 lines would make it easier to read.

read the first few chapters completely forcedmoronic mc

absolutely horrendous...................

Not my cup of tea, premise seems interesting but execution's was not great.................................................................................

The quality of the writing is excellently done. Its overall a very engaging read, binged as much as I could before I had to stop. I understand its difficult to build action sequences and talk shop in science or automation without some research, I just wish for more of Nicks thought process and experiences.

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clearly written by a dc fan with the knowledge of marvel. altough i quite enjoy the consept. i dont like him selling his stocks and the way he does things. and it seems author forces mc to change universes for idiotic reasons(forced)

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The MC is too passive He might as well be a human, because he's as useless as one🚶🏾‍♂️🚶🏾‍♂️🚶🏾‍♂️ He has so many advantages laid out before him, Yet chooses to remain so passive that it's annoying. At the end of the day this causes the fanfic to have to no hook on the readers

hey guys can anyone comment weather MC will grow up in the DC version or not?? because frankly in case of marvel he is pretty much a wuss all the time. I have no idea if this is due to the some disease or mental problem he has that will be revealed later.. maybe, his reincarnation messed up his brain even after giving him genius IQ.??

I feel like the writing is is done in one continous breath. Huge paragraphs only have a couple sentences and these paragraphs are walls of text. Though I really like the story and everything else is fine it is just hard to read.

Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic!

The story has good beginning, a background for the mc, however it's too slow pace for my taste. 0ver 80 chapter and the MC didnt get super heroing, even though he get's spider power pretty early. if you like world building and day to day progress of MC life this is for you. but if you like action and super hero mc then it's not (at least until the MC actually man up)

thank you for doing a linear version. thank you for doing a linear version. thank you for doing a linear version. thank you for doing a linear version.

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honestly I'm glad your not making us read it the other way it is a lot easier and not annoying please keep it going [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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The reasoning behind his desire to world hop seems shallow and insane at first but eventually the author gives an excellent explanation. Don't let any of the comments scare you away.

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I'm going to give my honest opinion and i hope you don't take offense honestly I'm disliking your character i mean the way you made him go crazy after his parents died deciding that anyone that gets close to him will die without proof especially since it has been proved wrong when earl didn't die i mean there are plenty of kids who are actually at that young age that he was and have it a lot worse and deal with it better and get over it after some time much less a reincarnated person like him and how he became all self blaming and doubting himself with the ben parker situation i mean its pure stupid especially when he knows that ben was in fact going to get killed if he didn't do anything from his future knowledge and how he's pretty much a pussy that gets pushed around by mary jane to do what she wants and even comes to his house to annoy him into doing it without him setting her straight of course I'm not saying the story is all bad its okay and i enjoy reading it but sometimes i get really frustrated at how the character acts

it's really good but the updates are really slow. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space

Honest review, needs a lot character development improvement,MC is a WUSS that gets pushed around by some thot. I didn't finish the up to the latest chapter because it gets frustrating, MC decided to travel to Dc verse but somehow gets cancelled because of some pussy? If he somehow believed that he has bad luck for killing his parents and decided to isolate himself to other people then why get pushed around by some girl? your MC sounded like some japanese wuss that has no conviction at all! like a scenario that "mc must get revenge and in the end ends up forgiving his blood enemy 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮". have some balls dude. -its your story and you decide what to do with it. this is just my honest opinion of your work, if you somehow read this then disagree then it's your work not mine.🥱 PEACE OUT✌️

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